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Friday 14 June 2019

Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families. While others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families. While others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is an irrefutable fact that employment opportunities are in good numbers humongous abroad. In the contemporary era, people are shifting bases to these countries more often in order to leverage the benefits. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where one section of society vociferously deems that this trend brings numerous benefits to the children of the families moving abroad whereas the others emphasize that these children would find it hard to adjust in the new environment.
Apparently, some people advocate that younger ones' future will take an upside turn when they will move to the developed world from the third world countries. These people have multifarious reasons to bolster their argument. First and foremost, developed countries have a state of the art educational infrastructure and the universities that are placed in the topmost rung worldwide. This guarantees a promising future for these children. To illustrate, United States of America has eminent universities like Harvard university and Stanford university, regarded as the best in QS University Rankings. Secondly, under developed and developing countries lack the basic healthcare required for sustenance. Due to this reason infant mortality rates are highest in the world for these countries. On the other hand, developed countries provide best healthcare facilities to young ones either free of cost or at a very nominal charge.

On the contrary, there are some who believe that children will have to face the music upon shifting to new countries due to myriad reasons. Chiefly, because of biological reasons it is hard for them to adjust to new climate. Would not this lead to detrimental repercussions on their health? Certainly yes. For example: Most of the children moving from hot climate of India to colder regions of Canada get hospitalized. Furthermore, teens will have trouble in making new friends at the new place and will have to bear the brunt for a few years initially.

In my opinion, although there are bright opportunities for families looking to move overseas but they should not take this decision impulsively. Instead, it should be carefully thought out while analysing both the pros and cons and its direct implications on their children.

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