Some people believe that young people bring more profits to a company. Others say that older people actually bring more profits. Discuss both views and give your opinion

.Some people believe that young people bring more profits to a company. Others say that older people actually bring more profits. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is widely known that private companies thrive when they are profitable i.e. when their revenues are greater than their expenditure. However, there are predominantly contrasting views where a section of society vociferously deems that youth are capable to bring more profit. While others emphasize that older people, due to their experience, can lead to greater profits than their counterparts.

Apparently, various factors make a section of people advocate that young generation have a positive impact on a company’s bottom line in the profit & loss statement and have many reasons to substantiate this argument. First and foremost is, in 21st century technology is changing dynamicallytechnology has grown by leaps and bounds and it is widely believed that younger people can embrace to these changes better. For example, next generation technology companies like facebook and twitter have a comparatively younger work force that are driving the technology and its changes. Secondly, young people are much more energetic than their older counterparts due to obvious biological reasons. Thirdly, younger generation are much more liberal and have a different world view that is needed in a world changing so quickly.

On the other hand, some believe that old people have an upper edge over young people for myriad reasons. Chiefly, because of the experience old people have an ability to handle important tasks better. To illustrate, Major bigwig companies like TATA, Infosys etc etcetra have people over 50 years of age in the senior management. Additionally, old people are systematic and organized, two significant traits required by corporates which are lacking in young people.

In my opinion, both young and old people bring different skills and traits to the table. Therefore, it is mandatory to have an optimum mix of both in order to reap in more profits. (example needed)

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LESS COMMUNICATION BETWEEN FAMILY MEMBERS II IELTS WRITING SAMPLES II IELTS WRITING TIPS

some people say now there is less communication between the family members than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Interaction has been the prime factor of socialization for ages. However, of late, it has been hugely influenced by technological advancements. So, compared with the past, social interaction is becoming increasingly fierce. Hence, the importance of bonds of kinship is gradually fading from people’s minds. In my opinion, the world has become a global village yet in many sense it has grown apart.

Apparently, the family ties are becoming  weaker. There are several reasons behind this unfortunate development. The most important, of course, is the change in our lifestyle, values, and goals. Owing to huge educational burden, intense competition, and 24/7 work commitments especially in developing countries  has put a huge pressure on young generation leaving a little room for them to spend time with family members and enjoy on family occasions.

Secondly, the blurring line between real and virtual life such as easy access to social media, internet browsing,  various applications and games on mobile itself engage youth and capture major chunk of the day. As per a survey conducted by American Youth Association, the millennial prefer to spend 80% of their idle time on internet and a meager of 5 % of their time with family. Thirdly, people are increasingly moving to another city or country in search of better education, jobs or living standards. They leave their family behind. While it is possible to keep in touch through modern communication means, an email or phone calls is not equal to face-to-face interaction. Lastly, we are living in the age of individualism. Everyone needs their space. This has made us more self-centered than our parents or grandparents. We no longer believe in making adjustments or compromises. We want everything our way. This attitude creates strain in our relationships.

 Overall, with the hustle and bustle of our lives and the maddening rush of proving oneself, most people have lost the daily connect with family members. But we must realise that our biggest strength is our family. Relationships are like potted plants. We need to nourish them. If we don’t give them love and affection they need, they will wilt.