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Saturday 5 March 2022

CELPIP TASK-2 Some women claim that ladies can be better parents than men. This might be based on different lifestyles and approaches towards nurturing children. However, men have proven to be great parents as well.

 Some women claim that ladies can be better parents than men. This might be based on different lifestyles and approaches towards nurturing children. However, men have proven to be great parents as well.

Write about 150-200 words explaining one of the two options below. Explain why you

choose the topic. Why is the other choice not more suitable? You may also reflect on

some personal experiences or other practical examples.

Option A: Women are better parents.

Option B: Men are better parents

I vehemently reckon that women are far more better parents than men. Even though the father and mother both are accountable for bringing up the children, the women have proven themselves superior parents as a result of their condition, their less aggressive natures and they are generally better to communicate with younglings. 

First and foremost, unlike men who remain busy at their works and have to stay outside the home most of the time, women mainly take all sorts of care of the child, like- feeding, bathing and do most of the works child's study, homework, assignment, projects. To substantiate, in many countries, mothers are usually less engaged in working hence, have a closer sensational relationship to their offspring than fathers. Secondly, not only child learns moral values which are prime ingredients to become good human from the mother ,but also women keep her eyes on every small activity of children. 


Thirdly, a father is suppose to establish discipline in the youngsters thus, they fear him as a disciplinarian however, mother is more compassionate and less hostile toward children than men. Even after the child is delivered, the attachment that a mother builds with her child throughout pregnancy is visible. Mothers will go to any length to ensure that their children are safe. 


Considering these reasons, I firmly believe women are born with an internal maternity instinct ,which cause them to continually be concerned about the protection of their children. Again, these are my personal beliefs, I am definitely not belittling the role of a father. 


Thank you for having the opportunity to participate in this survey. 

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