Some parents think that children should be the best at everything they do, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. IELTS | IELTS WRITING TASK-2

 Some parents think that children should be the best at everything they do, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A child is like an empty bucket and their character is like a molten clay, one can mould these incarnations of God as they want to. However, there are two contrasting views where a section of society deems that children should be encouraged to give their best efforts, no matter what activity they are doing or not remain debatable because of its multiple benefits while other contradicts. 

Apparently, some believe that it would play paramount significant role in the life of younger ones to have strong determination for everything for myriad reasons. Chiefly, not only a sense of responsibility is being fostered from tender age ,but also they will approach great heights of the life to get the objective finished. Secondly, unlike quitting, they will be able to come up with various strategies to tackle problems arising along the way. For example, According to Forbes magazine youngling develop a pattern of behaviour that help them become more flexible and creative in problem solving at an unprecedented scale. 

On the other hand, various factors makes a section of society advocate that children do not need to make determined attempts at what they are following and have many reasons to justify it. First and foremost, it concerns their mental development if parents constantly require them to expand tremendous efforts, they can likely to suffer from stress. For example, In a BBC research it is revealed that most of the parents across the globe encourage their children to always try their best in studies in order to compete with peers which is the prime reason of children getting depressed. Furthermore, being constantly reminded of taking a superficial approach towards everything would create a psychological spectre that they are not trying enough and are inferior to others. Hence, this can shatter a child’s confidence.

In my profound opinion, although parents are the true heroes of children yet it seems to me that children are more likely to attain success if they exert themselves to the limit.