your apartment manager is surveying your opinion about swimming pool in your building. Currently, your building has a swimming pool, but it’s really old and needs to be renovated. Some tenants prefer to have a small gym instead of pool. The apartment manager has asked you to complete an opinion survey. CELPIP | CELPIP writing task-2

 your apartment manager is surveying your opinion about swimming pool in your building. Currently, your building has a swimming pool, but it’s really old and needs to be renovated. Some tenants prefer to have a small gym instead of pool. The apartment manager has asked you to complete an opinion survey. 

Option A: I would like to keep the swimming pool

Option B: I would like to have gym 

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I vehemently reckon to have a well furnished swimming pool in our building. Even though gym sessions can optimise mental and physiological training effects ,the constructive ripples of swimming pool in terms of maintaining a healthy weight, healthy heart and lungs is unsurpassable. 

First and foremost, not only swimming is one of my favorite activity ,but also my children like to play with water after school as it tones muscles and builds strength. Secondly, an hour of swimming burns almost as many calories as running, without all the impact on your bones and joints. To substantiate, according to a research swimming works your entire body, head to toe and builds endurance. 

Thirdly, unlike patrons who can not perform high impact exercises in gym, Swimming can be a safe exercise option for people with arthritis, injury and disabilities. To facilitate, One study showed that people with osteoarthritis reported significant reductions in joint pain and stiffness, and experienced less physical limitation after engaging in activities like swimming and cycling.

Considering these reasons, I firmly believe in having a swimming pool. Again this is my personal opinion, but I will agree with whatever decision will be made by apartment manager. 

Thank you for having the opportunity to participate in this survey. 

CELPIP writing task-2 | You are working in a company offering IT services. Your company is conducting survey to know ways to improve working environment. There are two options - Job satisfaction survey: Option A : Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of experience Option B : Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of educational qualification

 You are working in a company offering IT services. Your company is conducting survey to know ways to improve working environment. There are two options -

Job satisfaction survey:

Option A : Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of experience

Option B : Give a salary hike to all the employees on the basis of educational qualification

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I vehemently reckon to exponentially rise salary of all the employees on the grounds of work experience. Even though highly qualified employee has substantial contribution in a company's growth, the paramount significance of work experience in terms of understanding how organizations work is unsurpassable. 

Firstly, not only an experienced employee have self-understanding, maturity, independence and self-confidence ,but also have a better understanding of how the organization can comprehend  young people for work. AlthoughQualifications indicate that you have the depth quintessential knowledge for your profession, experience proves that you have practiced working in your field. To substantiate, industries, such as construction, prefer someone with practical experience and reliable work history. Secondly, unlike a fresher, an experienced one may be able to start work faster with no need for lengthy training as they are proficient in their respective forte thus deserves respectable salary hike.

Thirdly, until recently, employers are less intrigued towards the degrees, and focus more on experience. Experience depicts both candidates can work well in teams, alone, under pressure, be punctual, loyal and their ability to adapt and achieve in a real-life work environment and employees drive business to new heights , so if their income impacts  their stability in some way, that's going to impact their productivity. That means their salary is directly proportionate to company's success.

Considering these reasons, I firmly believe that experienced employees should have above average salaries. Again, these are my personal beliefs, but I will support whatever the management decides to do.

I appreciate the chance provided to me to voice my opinion.

Celpip | task-2 | A bike was recently stolen from your workplace. Your boss wants to prevent this from happening again. She is conducting a survey among the employees and would appreciate your input.

 A bike was recently stolen from your workplace. Your boss wants to prevent this from happening again. She is conducting a survey among the employees and would appreciate your input.

Which option would you prefer? 

Option A: Hire a security guard Option 

B: Install cameras

I vehemently reckon that modern surveillance would be more effective. Even though since time immemorial, security guard act as a crime deterrent, consistency of the protection offered by surveillance cameras outweighs security guards. 

First and foremost, unlike security guards, Wireless CCTV Technology are equipped with 360-degree vision, key influencing factor in providing an unbiased account of an event, do not ever take a vacation, have health related absences from work or fall asleep on the job. To substantiate, there has been numerous crimes that have been committed where witnesses who saw the same event but they still ended up giving law enforcement officials completely distinct accounts of the crime and descriptions of the suspects. Whereas, security cameras are installed in such a way that has substantial contribution in overlapping fields of view, which provide multiple angles of a particular event. 

Secondly, not only CCTV cameras are one-time investments ,but also foster an environment of optimized individual integrity on an unprecedented scale. Employees, visitors and the general public, when they know they are under supervision will be on their best code of conduct subconsciously. Thirdly, cameras equipped with artificial intelligence and Big Data has substantial contribution in detecting the face of an accused or a suspect from a database and pull out details immediately. 

Considering these reasons, I firmly believe contemporary security cameras have the technology and potential in them to completely eliminate human efforts at an unprecedented scale. Again, these are my personal beliefs, but I will support whatever the management decides to do.

I appreciate the opportunity to provide input on this issue.

CELPIP TASK-2 | Officials in your city have an empty space and are planning to build a zoo for recreational purposes. Some residents think that the place might be used for something more complex like a shopping mall or a movie theater.

 Test Format :

Topic & Time

Writing an Email (27 min) 

Survey Question (26 min 

Try to write between 150 and 200 words for each writing task.

Question :

Officials in your city have an empty space and are planning to build a zoo for

recreational purposes. Some residents think that the place might be used for something

more complex like a shopping mall or a movie theater.

Write about 150-200 words defending one of the two options provided below. You

should say why you support the topic and how it would help the residents around you.

What problems are there with the other choice?

Option A: The town’s municipality should build a zoo.

Option B: The town‘s municipality should build something more complex.

Sample answer : 

I vehemently reckon the town’s municipality should build shopping mall or a movie theatre as it has paramount significance to the community it belongs to. Although zoo holds constructive ripples in terms of educational resource, conservation for endangered animals, economic resource yet    the multi pronged advantages of multiplex is unsurpassable. 

First and foremost, not only leisure needs are manifested in the desire for a shopping experience ,but also watching movies in multiplexes, lounging and eating out. Secondly, if a businessman set up a store in a shopping mall, retail store owners can rent shop space which would be rewarding for both the businessman and the customers on an unprecedented scale. 

Thirdly, unlike zoological garden which exploits animals, need proper funding to meet the needs of animal population, even experts find themselves in dangerous circumstances with predatory animals, mall management organises promotional activities like events, contests, star visits, premiers and customer loyalty programs. As a result, young crowd witnessed hanging out in malls/ shopping centres as a everyday habit. 

Considering these reasons, I strongly believe to have complex building as it will promote an exponential increase in demand and supply to the town which will improve tourism. Again, these are my personal beliefs, but I will support whatever state authorities decide to do. 

Thank you for having the opportunity to participate in this survey. 

CELPIP TASK-2 | Your city is considering building a new airport near your house. A survey is being conducted in your community to find out if the local residents support or oppose the project. If the project is approved, taxes would increase by 20% to pay for the project. The city’s mayor estimates that the project will create 5000 new jobs in the area.

Survey Question : 26 min

Your city is considering building a new airport near your house. A survey is being conducted in your community to find out if the local residents support or oppose the project. If the project is approved, taxes would increase by 20% to pay for the project. The city’s mayor estimates that the project will create 5000 new jobs in the area.

Which option do you prefer? Explain your choice.

Option A: Build the airport 

Option B: Do not build the airport

SAMPLE ANSWER : 

I vehemently reckon that airports should be located away from residential areas in order to mitigate the extent of noise pollution. Even though the residents would reap the benefits in terms of employment opportunities, the hike in taxes would invite potential problems for a certain strata of society which cannot be ignored. 

First and foremost, not only proximity to an airport is a death knell for those with respiratory conditions, but also zoning regulation are implemented near some airports to reserve the area around for commercial, industrial and retail use only which can limit the construction of child care centres and schools. 

Secondly, unlike other residential sites, areas with airport has noise levels of 65 decibels which seems to be a more determining factor. Other fundamental catastrophic effects that aviation has over property value are safety, traffic and scenery. 

Considering these reasons, I personally think it would be better to not build airport near house as consistently breathing in the ozone produced by the aircraft can adversely impact respiratory tissue causing emphysema and chronic bronchitis in the long run. 

Thank you for giving me a chance to voice my opinion.