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your apartment manager is surveying your opinion about swimming pool in your building. Currently, your building has a swimming pool, but it’s really old and needs to be renovated. Some tenants prefer to have a small gym instead of pool. The apartment manager has asked you to complete an opinion survey. CELPIP | CELPIP writing task-2


 your apartment manager is surveying your opinion about swimming pool in your building. Currently, your building has a swimming pool, but it’s really old and needs to be renovated. Some tenants prefer to have a small gym instead of pool. The apartment manager has asked you to complete an opinion survey. 


Option A: I would like to keep the swimming pool

Option B: I would like to have gym 


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I vehemently reckon to have a well furnished swimming pool in our building. Even though gym sessions can optimise mental and physiological training effects ,the constructive ripples of swimming pool in terms of maintaining a healthy weight, healthy heart and lungs is unsurpassable. 


First and foremost, not only swimming is one of my favorite activity ,but also my children like to play with water after school as it tones muscles and builds strength. Secondly, an hour of swimming burns almost as many calories as running, without all the impact on your bones and joints. To substantiate, according to a research swimming works your entire body, head to toe and builds endurance. 


Thirdly, unlike patrons who can not perform high impact exercises in gym, Swimming can be a safe exercise option for people with arthritis, injury and disabilities. To facilitate, One study showed that people with osteoarthritis reported significant reductions in joint pain and stiffness, and experienced less physical limitation after engaging in activities like swimming and cycling.


Considering these reasons, I firmly believe in having a swimming pool. Again this is my personal opinion, but I will agree with whatever decision will be made by apartment manager. 


Thank you for having the opportunity to participate in this survey. 

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