Your local gym has been experiencing issues with overcrowding during peak hours. Write an email to the gym manager suggesting improvements to address this issue. CELPIP TASK-1 EMAIL

FORMAT OF PROBLEM + SUGGESTION EMAIL 

Dear…

•I am writing to express my disappointment with the / I am writing to express my concerns regarding the…. 

•over the past month, …. ………….   

While……. 

• In light of this, I request immediate remedial actions. Firstly, a comprehensive quality assessment of…. , ensuring they meet the advertised standards. Secondly, I seek an appropriate compensation for the….already received that were not up to par. This gesture would not only acknowledge the discrepancy but also demonstrate your commitment to customer satisfaction and service excellence. 

OR 

Given these serious issues, I demand a prompt and satisfactory resolution. I expect either a replacement of the item to match the quality and specifications originally advertised, a repair to address the damages and discrepancies, or a full refund for the unsatisfactory item received.

• I trust that you will take these concerns seriously and respond promptly. 

Sincerely, 

 Your local gym has been experiencing issues with overcrowding during peak hours. Write an email to the gym manager suggesting improvements to address this issue.

•Describe the problem with overcrowding at the gym.

•Explain how this affects the gym experience for members.

•Suggest specific strategies to alleviate the overcrowding issue.

Dear Gym Manager,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my concern about the overcrowding issue at our gym during peak hours, which has been affecting the workout experience for many members.

As most people prefer exercising before or after work, the gym tends to become overcrowded during early mornings and late evenings. 

Despite the ample space and equipment available, members often struggle to access machines, and trainers find it challenging to assist everyone effectively. This lead to not only frustration but also impact overall motivation.

Perhaps it would be beneficial, if a time-slot system is introduced to regulate member flow and increasing the number of trainers during peak hours to provide better support. These measures could help create a more organized and efficient environment for all.

I appreciate your time and consideration and look forward to any steps you may take to enhance the gym experience.

Best regards,


Rajat Sharma