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some people think that successful persons are those who have money but others think that scientists or doctor who contribute to society are more successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion? IELTS | IELTS WRITING TASK-2

some people think that successful persons are those who have money but others think that scientists or doctor who contribute to society are more successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 

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In this contemporary era, successful people are the most influential figures in the world. However, there are two contrasting views where  section of society vehemently deems that people having whopping amount of  money are powerful and victorious.while others emphasizes that scientists and doctors are considered to be most triumphant because of their substantial contribution for the betterment of society.

Apparently, various factors make a section of people advocate that staggering amount of money is the most prominent factor in the life of accomplished individuals and they have plethora of reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost, not only prosperous humans can achieve anything in life ,but also they can bring paradigm shift in the way of living of society as the proverb goes ‘Money talks’ they can afford luxurious lifestyle and also they are able to create number of employments by investing in job sectors or creating a new businesses . For instance, Jeff Bezos is the multimillionaire who can afford space travel which a normal person can not even imagine in their whole life. Who created a numerous jobs in amazon worldwide and people benefited considerably from his lucrative businesses. Secondly, unlike plain folks, thriving personalities can do endorsement for several brands. Subsequently, they represent their culture and country to the whole world through many mediums.To facilitate, actors from Hollywood or Bollywood are well known for their movies and represents number of brands.

On the other hand, some people believe that auspicious folks are those who serve the society such as doctors and teachers plays paramount significant role in the community for myriad reasons. Chiefly, if scientists keep doing innovations, there would be profitability for mankind. To corroborate, Marie Curie is one of the greatest scientist who discovered the radioactive elements which created a constructive ripples in terms of nuclear medicine. Therefore, her significant contribution is beyond the power of money. Furthermore, can we think our life without doctors? Certainly, no as we know doctors are next to God and they serve the humanity worldwide during unprecedented situations emerged out due to covid without even taking care of themselves. On top of that, their sacrifices would be in minds of people forever, which makes them at top of the ladder.

In my profound opinion, although money is not the predominant factor which determine the prosperity of humankind yet this is the tool to assess the power in current scenario. Incontestably there is no skepticism that scientist and doctors who contribute directly to mankind are considered to be more rewarding. 

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