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Monday, 30 March 2020

Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree? Writing atsk-2

Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?


SAMPLE ANSWER : Criminal activities are on the rise with every passing year, young people are no exception as they are equally involved in serious offences. It is often argued that young offenders should serve the same punishment as adults when they commit serious crimes. However, I strongly disagree with the given notion.


Apparently, there are myriad reasons for not sentencing the harsh penalties, first and foremost is that the young minds are impressionable and they get trapped in wrong intentions of evil-minded people and start acting in the same way. For instance, In India, many adolescents were captured by the cops for smuggling illegal drugs and they had no idea of the consequences of what they were doing. Henceforth, such fragile minded youngsters should be educated about the values of the society, putting them behind the bars is not a positive solution. Secondly, it is morally unacceptable to sentence brutal punishment to younger people because they are in the development phase and it is sometimes difficult for them to differentiate between right and wrong. Sometimes they violate the laws accidentally or due to their outrageous behavior. For instance, driving cars on high speed under the influence of alcohol is commonly seen in many youngsters. Ergo, such behaviors need counseling and corrective measures so that the respect the legal system and admit their mistakes.

Furthermore, penalizing in the same way as adults can make the matter worse because the young people may take punishment as an insult and start developing a hatred for the legal system and constitution subsequently extremists develop out of those young people. To substantiate my view, A recent research study in the Paris university revealed that the majority of  gangsters were harshly punished for  little  mistakes and that caused them to adopt illegal ways. In addition to this, sometimes the stigma of imprisonment make the person mentally weak and does not allow them to reconnect to the society. Ergo, such punishment should be avoided, rather the offender should be educated to sympathy  with the victims.

Having dwelled at such thought it is ostensible that young convicts should not receive the same penalties as the adults owing to the negative consequences and it can cause more harm than benefit.

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